The candle burns lower as the room grows colder
while the spiders feast upon their prey.
The dust grows denser while the man sits tenser,
as his cough echoes in the room.
Work stacks higher,
sounds from the fire,
his foot gently tapping against the wooden floor.
Shadows from afar,
made by the stars,
creep ever so slowly from the window.
cold to the bone,
secluded from the rest of the world.
A quill drips black,
sitting on a rack,
gradually changing the color of the wood.
Recalling memories,
taking remedies,
a shot of whiskey to easy his nerves.
The man starts to laugh,
when the bottle is half,
as creatures lurk outside his door.
the crickets a bastard,
skipping there harmonic melody.
The bottle is empty;
his body becomes hefty,
with dizziness clenching his frail mind.
The room becomes black,
as the man starts to hack,
uncomfortably suppressing the inevitable blowout.
Ten dollars now lay on the floor;
the man never viewed it that way before.
Rats came happily,
as the man sat sadly,
watching them devour the pile of stench.
His gun lay loaded;
a loud explosion,
smoke fills the little room.
Load the bullet,
pack the powder,
the power of god is in his hands.
The man grows tired,
the gun rises higher,
and the bullet of freedom will reign once more.
2 comments:
I really like this one. Paints a really vivid pictures. Nice use of rhyme. Goodo flow. Reminded my of Poe a little bit. Keep writing.
I love the rhyme scheme in this, and this is probably the first thing I read of yours that wasnt so abstract that I had to really think and stretch to make sense of it. Very concrete and cohesive.
I would really love to see some line breaks to highlight the rhyme scheme. But its pretty badass the way it is.
-Dan
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